题目内容
【题目】初中生活,精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐,展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待,请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示:1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获;
2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望;
3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求:1. 80-100词,首句已给出,不计入总词数;2. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________
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【答案】The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文,初中生活,精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐,展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待,请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟,动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在时态,这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词