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【题目】书面表达

去年暑假,吴迪和钟辉乘火车去了北京。根据以下表格内容,写一篇80词左右的短文。

周一

到达

周二

参观博物馆

周三

去北海公园

周四

购物

周五

乘飞机回家

要求:(1)内容完整,语意连贯,语法规范;(2)文章内容必须包含表格内所有信息,可适当发挥;(3)文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Last summer, Wu Di and Zhong Hui went to Beijing for their holiday.

【答案】Last summer, Wu Di and Zhong Hui went to Beijing for their holiday.

They went there by train. It took them 10 hours to get there. They arrived on Monday. On Tuesday, they did some sightseeing first, and then they visited a museum. On Wednesday, they went to Beihai Park. They went boating. On Thursday, they did a lot of shopping. They bought many presents and some beautiful clothes. They went home by plane on Friday.

It was a short holiday, but it was great. What a great time they had!

【解析】试题分析:这是一篇材料作文,结合所给材料,介绍吴迪和钟辉去年夏天的北京之旅,要把各要点有条理地表达出来。注意一些常见句式的应用,注意把握时态与人称。还要注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。

写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练, 要点全面,人称与时态把握准确,最后作者发表了自己的观点和看法。本文采用了丰富的短语,比如:by train, did some sightseeing, went boating, did a lot of shopping;还使用了连词and、but, 固定句型 It takes sb. some time to do sth.与感叹句等,使文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文。

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