题目内容
2.在日常生活中,你看到身边有哪些不良现象?请列举一些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法.提示:speak loudly,cut in line(插队),waste food,unfriendly(冷漠的),offer no help…
要求:1.参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整.
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
4.词数:不少于80词.(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)
In our daily life,I usually see some bad behavior around us.For example,
I think if everyone can think more of others,we'll have a better living environment.
分析 这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己身边的不良现象以及自己的想法和做法.结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I often hear people…;Some people…;people seem unfriendly…;So I never…等句式的应用.写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用.写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意使用所提示的短语.
解答 In our daily life,I usually see some bad behavior around us.For example,I often hear people speak and laugh loudly in public.It is too noisy.Some people cut in line while others are waiting.It makes me unhappy.And in our school dining hall,I often see students waste food.At times,people seem unfriendly and offer no help when others are in trouble.For me,my parents are strict with me.They often tell me to behave well.So I never drop litter about.And I never draw on the desk or on the wall.I am polite to old people.
I think if everyone can think more of others,we'll have a better living environment.
点评 动笔前先要注意认真写作要求,确定写作内容;分析内容要点,列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性,用好连接词;为丰富文章的文采,可以多用一些复合句.最后,注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误,写好后反复读几遍,适当修改.
| A. | trouble | B. | interest | C. | fun |
| A. | all | B. | none | C. | both | D. | neither |
| A. | turn up | B. | get up | C. | give up | D. | grow up |
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| A. | That's a good idea | B. | Don't worry | ||
| C. | Never mind | D. | The same to you |
要求:1.80词左右;2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息.
| Dear Daming, I'd like to tell you something about my"important gift".It was a beautiful smile. When I was nine years old,I went to a new school.As a result,no one knew who I was.I felt lonely.Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual,a girl walked to me and smiled. Though she said no words,I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm again.After that she became my good friend. As we all know,everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble.Could you tell me something about your"important gift"that touched you or changed your life? Yours, Susan |
I'm glad to read your letter and your"important gift"really touches me.As for me,my"important gift"was my mum's sad tears.
Two years ago,I became a"problem child",and I was tired of everything.I did everything that was against my parents.That made my mum very sad,but she still loved me as usual.
One night,I lost my reason and broke a glass,which caused my mum to burst into tears.All at once,her sadness touched my deep heart.Since
then,I have completely changed myself.
Best wishes,
Daming.
| A. | have seen | B. | has seen | C. | sees |