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【题目】书面表达(10分)

俗话说“远亲不如近邻”, 邻居对我们的生活非常重要。请你根据下面的提示, 以“My neighbour”为题,写一篇作文,词数不少于70词。

要点如下:

1.我是Simon,住在阳光社区,在那里我结识了一个新邻居叫Peter。我和他住同一栋楼,他住在七楼。

2.他是一名警察,在警察局上班,他工作很努力;

3.他热心而且乐于助人,当人们遇到各种问题时,都向他求助;

4.我们社区的每个人都喜欢他,我们有他这样的好邻居真是太幸运了。

注意:

1.短文须包括以上要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯。

2.可展开合理想象,作适当发挥。

3.词数:70个左右。

【答案】

My neighbour

I’m Simon./ My name is Simon. I live at the Sunshine Community. I meet/know a new neighbour called Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the seventh floor. He is a policeman. He works at the police station. He works very hard. He is kind and helpful. People (will) ask him for help when they meet all kinds of problems. Everyone in our community likes him. It is very lucky to have a neighbour like him.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以Simon的身份,介绍一下自己新认识的邻居Peter。题目中给出了我们具体的写作内容,我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知,这篇短文我们应该主要使用一般现在时态,第三人称he来表达,因此我们要特别注意每句话中谓语动词的形式,都需要用第三人称单数形式,动词加s或es。在完整表达内容的同时,我们还需要注意使短文意思连贯,表达流畅,这就需要我们尽量使用一些连词和好的句型,如and, but, when等,这样可以让这篇短文更丰富,有节奏。

写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的范文,短文中作者按照题目的要求介绍了自己的新邻居Peter,内容完整,包含了题目中给出的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。其次这篇短文使用了正确的人称和时态,并且注意到了第三人称单数形式的变化,符合语法规范。再就是这篇短文中用到了一些比较好的词汇和句型,如I meet/know a new neighbour called Peter中过去分词called的使用;再如People (will) ask him for help when they meet all kinds of problems.中,使用了when引导的时间状语从句,而且时态很正确;还有It is very lucky to have a neighbour like him.中动词不定式的使用等。

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