Question

书面表达（15分）

根据表格提供的信息，以The Changes of Our School为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈谈你们学校的变化。参考词汇：teaching building, basketball court

过去	现在
学校小，教室少而且旧，屋内光线暗。 只有十几个老师。 校园内花草树木少。 操场小。	有两座高大的教学楼，室内光线好，还有电脑室和图书馆。 老师增多了。 校园内花草树木随处可见。 有篮球场和足球场。

The Changes of Our School

Great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years.

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Answer 1

The Changes of Our School

Great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years. In the past ,our school was small .There weren’t many classrooms and they were old and dark. Only a few teachers worked here. We could hardly find flowers or trees in it .And the playground was very small. Everything has changed now. Two tall and bright teaching buildings have appeared in our school .We also have our own computer room and library. More teachers are working here. We can see flowers and trees everywhere. What’s more, we can enjoy playing ball games on the basketball court or on the football court.

I hope our school will become more and more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要写学校的过去和现在，因此一般过去时和一般现在时的句子使用比较多，，所以在写作时，要注意时态的变化。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: what’s more；enjoy playing ball games；Everything has changed now；We can see flowers and trees everywhere；I hope our school will become more and more beautiful in the future。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。