Question

下面表格反映的是Andy一家10年来的变化，请你根据其内容，以Changes to Andy’s family为题，写一篇调查报告。

	Ten years ago	Now
Flat	A small flat with two rooms	A big flat with ten rooms
Vehicle	Two bikes	A car
Appliance	A 21-inch TV set	A big TV set and two small ones

要求：

1. 内容充实，覆盖要点；

2. 报告中要包含总结和感想；

3. 70词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Changes to Andy’s family

Great changes have taken place to Andy’s family in the past 10 years.

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Answer 1

Great changes have taken place to Andy’s family in the past 10 years.

Ten years ago, Andy’s family lived in a flat with two rooms. But now, their new flat has 10 rooms. In the past, his family had only two bikes. His parents rode them to work every day. Now, they own a car. In the past the family had only a 21-inch TV set. But now they have three TV sets. One of them is very large.

Life has become better and better these years. What will life be like in another 10 years?

【解析】

试题分析：这是篇命题作文。题目中已经给出了写作的要点和要求。写作时，一定要注意要点的齐全，不能遗漏要点。另外，注意时态的变化，文章可使用一般现在时和一般过去时两种时态，注意主谓一致性。句子直接可适当使用连词增加文章的逻辑性。

【亮点分析】

本文要点齐全，表达准确流利。文中用到了一些常用的表达方式，例如Andy’s family lived in a flat with two rooms. Andy一家住在只有两个房间的平房里；With，有。In the past, 在过去；. His parents rode them to work every day.他父母每天骑单车去上班；Life has become better and better these years.这些年生活变得越来越好；better and better越来越好。

考点：提纲式作文。