题目内容
【题目】假设你是Jacky,明天是你的生日,你想请你的同学参加你的生日派对。请根据下面的
提示,写一封70词左右的email给Wilson,告诉他有关派对的事宜及去你家的路线。
Time: From 5:00 to 7:30 in the afternoon
Place: Home
Location: Rongchang Garden
Route: Walk along Qinhuai Road from the school, turn left into Xinglong Street at the second turning,see the gate on your right
Activities: Make dumplings, play games
Dear Wilson,
Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it.
Best wishes,
Jacky
【答案】Dear Wilson,
Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it. It will be from 5:00 p.m. to 7:30 p.m. I hope you can
come.
It is easy to go from the school to my home. My home is in Rongchang Garden. You can walk along Qinhuai
Road from the school and turn left into Xinglong Street at the second turning.
Rongchang Garden is just on your right. I will wait for you at the gate. Please call me before you get here.We will
make dumplings together and after dinner we will play some games. I am sure you will enjoy them.
Best wishes,
Jacky
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如be going to,have a party,from to,walk along,turn left,at the second turning,on your right,wait for,at the gate,play some games等。而Tomorrow is my birthday and I am going to have a party for it. / I will wait for you at the gate./Please call me before you get here./I am sure you will enjoy them.等多种时态和从句结构的运用,丰富了习作内容,使表达多样,是本文的最大亮点。