Question

19．假如你名叫He Cong，在即将毕业之际，你的英语老师Mr．Smith要求你们每人给他写一封英文书信作纪念．   
    要点提示：
 1．对Mr．Smith的印象：总是工作努力：有困难时尽力帮助我们．
    2．简述一次经历：你开始学英语时无论如何努力都学不好；在你几乎要放弃时，他发现了你的问题；他与你进行了一次如何学英语的谈话；他从此不断帮助你；你对英语感兴趣了；你现在英语学得好．'
    3．你的感受：很幸运作他的学生．
    要求：
    1．词数：l00左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．
    2．所有的要点提示必须涉及，可适当添加内容．
    3．字迹工整，卷面整洁，语言流畅．
    4．不得用真实姓名、校名、地名．     
    参考词语：try to help，have atalk，do well in，luck
Dear Mr．Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soonBut I really want to say thank you very much．And I won't forget you．You are a handsome，friendly and clever teacher．You are always hard-working and strict．When we have problems，you usually help us at once．
I still remember you tried to help me，when I started to learn english．I really thought it very difficult．And I tried a lot，but I couldn't get good grade．So I decided to give it up．At this time，you had a talk with me about how to learn English．Since then you helped me all the time．And I began to take interest in english．Now，I do well in English．So I feel very lucky to be your student．I have learned a lot from you．For example，I will help others when they are in trouble．
Best wishes to you!
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给出写作要点的提纲作文．内容为在毕业之际给老师的一封信，写作要点是 1．对Mr．Smith的印象． 2．简述一次经历3．你的感受，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时，人称为第一人称和第二人称．
常用到的重点句型和短语：hard-working勤奋的，try to do sth尽力去做某事，give up放弃，all the time一直，take interest in对…感兴趣等等

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon．But I really want to say thank you very much．And I won't forget you．You are a handsome，friendly and clever teacher．You are always hard-working and strict．When we have problems，you usually help us at once．（对Mr．Smith的印象）
I still remember you tried to help me，when I started to learn english．I really thought it very difficult．And I tried a lot，but I couldn't get good grade．So I decided to give it up．．（高分句型）At this time，you had a talk with me about how to learn English．Since then you helped me all the time．And I began to take interest in english．Now，I do well in English．（简述一次经历）  So I feel very lucky to be your student．I have learned a lot from you．For example，（高分句型）I will help others when they are in trouble．（我的感受）
Best wishes to you!
Yours
He Cong

点评 这是一篇给出写作要点的提纲类作文．考生需根据所给题目及要点展开作文．可先从最基本的词汇入手，然后组词成句，考生需特别注意英语的表达习惯，使文章看起来条理更清晰，语句更连贯