Question

作文（计10分）

假如你是Simon，请用英语介绍你的学校生活。

要点：1、学校大而漂亮，教室干净。

2、班上有30个学生，彼此友好。

3、一楼有一个现代化的图书馆，经常去那儿看书。

4、早上8点上课，下午4点半放学，一天上六节课。

5、最喜欢的科目、爱好。

6、进行体育活动，放学后打篮球、踢足球。

7、老师们对你很好，你很喜欢他们。

8、喜欢学校。

注意：1、字数：70字左右。

2、文中不得出现真实的人名，及班级名。

3、短文需包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当加以细节或发挥，

I’m Simon .

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Answer 1

I’m Simon. I’d like to tell you something about my school life. My school is big and beautiful, and the classrooms are clean. There are 30 students in my class, we are friendly to each other.

On the ground floor, there is a modern library. I often read there. We have six lessons every day. Our class begins at 8 a.m. and finishes at 4:30 p.m.. English is my favourite subject. I like drawing, too. After school, I often play basketball or football with my friends on the playground. All my teachers are nice to me, and I like them very much.

I enjoy my school.

【解析】

试题分析：在写作文时，除了注意文章的格式之外，还要注意不要遗漏文章的要点，因为要点也是阅卷老师特别关注的地方。同样也要注意使用合适的连接词让各要点成为一个整体，注意使用高级的词汇。

【亮点说明】要点齐全，语句表达准确清晰。句式结构简单精练。比如：Our class begins at 8 a.m. and finishes at 4:30 p.m.

考点：考查提纲式作文