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【题目】写作

最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。

	原因
赞成	帮助他人是美德； 帮助他人就是帮助自己；
反对	怕陷入麻烦； 怕被误解；
你的观点?（至少两点）

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

参考词汇：美德virtue

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．

Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．

However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．

In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love．

【解析】

试题分析：该提示一篇话题作文，属议论文。讨论的话题是“是否应该帮助陌生人”，有正反两方面的观点。要点都给了出来。本文题型是考生非常熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。审题时注 意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。在文章红可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】：本文中连接词的使用很到位，如and，but，However， In my opinion等。文章还多次使用主从复合句，这些都为该文增色不少。