Question

【题目】写作
随着全球环境的恶化，越来越多的人选择过低碳生活。请写一篇英语短文，倡议你的同学们加入低碳一族。要点如下：
1节约用水、用电、用纸；
2去超市自备购物袋；
3不要购买不必要的衣服；
4不要购买一次性的杯子和碗筷；
5步行或骑自行车上学。
注意：1词数80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
With theglobal warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low carbon life forthe purpose of reducing greenhouse gases.

Answer 1

【答案】With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases.
We'd better save much water and paper and electricity. We should use less carbon and oil. It's important to turn off the lights and computers when you leave the room. We should take our own bags instead of using plastic bags from the supermarket. We can buy few clothes which are unnecessary. We shouldn't buy or use one off cups or chopsticks or bowls. It's good for us to walk or take bikes to school instead of taking cars. We can also plant more trees.
Let's take action and be low carbon people!
【解析】这是以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就 不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。