题目内容
【题目】 假设你是九年级的学生王宇,每天忙于学习。昨天晚上有幸和同学们去听了一场中国民族音乐会, 心情愉悦。请你写一篇日记,并谈谈作为九年级的学生应如何安排业余生活。
写作要点:
1. 表达你听音乐会后的愉悦心情。
2. 音乐会相关事宜:
(1)音乐会时间和地点:6点到8点,哈尔滨大剧院(Harbin Grand Theatre)
(2)最让你感动的曲子是《二泉映月》(Erquan Yingyue)
(3)音乐会引起你对民乐的极大兴趣
3. 谈一谈作为九年级的学生如何安排业余生活。写作要求:
(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
(2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
(4)至少 80 词。
Dear Diary,
I finally have time to keep the diary.
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I’m sure to spend my life in Grade Nine meaningfully.
【答案】例文:
Dear Diary,
I finally have time to keep the diary.
I am busy with my study these days. In order to relax myself, last night I attended a concert with my students which was held from 6:00 to 8:00 p.m. at Harbin Grand Theatre. After the concert, I felt relaxed. The piece which was played on the erhu especially moved me and it had a simple name, Erquan Yingyue, but it was one of the most moving pieces of music that I’ve ever heard. The pieces of the concert increased my great interest in folk music.
As a junior high school student, we face a lot of pressure every day. I think we should learn to relax ourselves. We can do exercise, listen to some music or just hang out with our friends to have a break.
I’m sure to spend my life in Grade Nine meaningfully.
【解析】
1.题干解读:这是一篇日记。本篇写作要求以第一人称叙述和朋友去参加音乐会,要求叙述听完音乐会的感受,音乐会的相关事宜以及谈一谈作为九年级的学生如何安排业余生活。文章时态可以用一般过去时结合一般现在时。注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。