Question

【题目】请根据下表中的信息，写一篇介绍白鱀豚的段文（80个词左右）.

Nane	baiji (a kind of dolphin)
Other nanes	Chinese river dolphin,underwater panda
Living place	Middle part of Yangtze River
Have babies	Only one every two years
At birth	80~90 cm,3~5 kilos
Adult	1.4~2.5 meters,135~230 kilos
Food	Small fish,10 kilos a day
Life	25 years
Activities	In deep water,swim 60 km/h,afraid of people,group life

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

There is a kind of dolphin,and its name is baiji. It has other names, such as Chinese river dolphin, underwater panda. It lives in middle part of Yangtze River. It has only one every two years. When it was born, it is 80-90 centimeters high and 3-5kilograms heavy. When it grows up, it is 1.4-2.5 meters high and 135-230 kilograms heavy. It likes eating small fish and it can have 10 kilograms a day. It can live up to 25 years. It often plays in deep water. And it can swim at the speed of 60 kilometers per hour. But it is afraid of people. So it lives a group life. The dolphin is so lovely that we all love it.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍一只名叫baiji的海豚。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It has...，When it grows up...,It likes ...,It can live up to ...,The dolphin is ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了海豚的名字，接下来介绍它的生活地点，外貌，食物和寿命，最后指出海豚如此的可爱以至于我们都喜欢它。此处such as, every two years, grow up, at the speed of, so that等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。