Question

【题目】Writing (作文) (共20分)

Write at least 60 words about the topic “An Unforgettable Experience” (以“一次难忘的经历”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

初中生活即将结束，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多难以忘怀的经历。请谈谈令你难忘、值得回忆的一次经历。

Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考)：

graduate from… a meaningful activity

enjoy oneself remember…forever

（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Answer 1

【答案】

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，要求根据提示要点写一篇关于中学生活的文章。注意时态的变化。讲述过去的事情用一般过去时；讲述现在的事情用一般现在时；展望未来用一般将来时。词数为80个左右，不得出现真实的校名和人名。

写作亮点：文中使用了不少短语和句型，为文章增色不少。如be eager to do sth，do well in，give up，little by little，No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.等等。