Question

1．今年春季，我国西南大部分地区因为干旱严重缺水，2000多万人遇到饮水难题．学校要求每位学生，伸出援助之手帮助他们．现在请你以班长的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：
现状1．很长时间没有下雨
2．人们喝不到干净的饮用水
3．植物都枯死了
活动目的
1．号召人们节约用水
2．保护环境，预防自然灾害
呼吁我们应该做一些力所能及的事情去帮助他们，比如每人捐一瓶水，…（请自拟内容）
注意：词数90左右．文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear students，
This spring，most parts in the southwest of China are short of water．It is difficult for more than 20，000，000people to drink water．The people there don't have enough clean drinking water to drink because it hasn't rained for a long time．What's worse，a great number of wild animals and plants die because of lack of water．I am so shocked that I hope people around the world can save water and protect our environment．We should take actions to prevent natural disaster．Now so many people in Yunnan and some other provinces are in difficulty．I think we should try our best to help them．We can donate bottles of drinking water to them．We can also raise money for them to help them dig more wells．In a word，let's stretch our helping hands to help those in need．
Thanks for your joining!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：What's worse，a great number of wild animals and plants die because of lack of water．更糟糕的是，大量的野生动植物由于水的缺乏而死亡．What's worse更糟糕的是．a great number of+名词复数，后面的谓语用复数．because of因为，后跟名词、动名词或代词．lack of缺少…，这里的lack是名词．
句型二：I am so shocked that I hope people around the world can save water and protect our environment．我很震惊，希望世界各地的人们能节约用水，保护我们的环境．这里是so…that"如此…以致于…"引导的结构状语从句．so修饰形容词．around the world世界各地的人们．save water节约用水．protect our environment保护我们的环境．and连接并列成分．

解答 Dear students，
This spring，most parts in the southwest of China are short of water．It is difficult for more than 20，000，000people to drink water．（事件）The people there don't have enough clean drinking water to drink because it hasn't rained for a long time．（缺少原因）What's worse，a great number of wild animals and plants die because of lack of water．【高分句型一】I am so shocked that I hope people around the world can save water and protect our environment．【高分句型二】（提倡）We should take action to prevent natural disaster．Now so many people in Yunnan and some other provinces are in difficulty．I think we should try our best to help them．（建议）We can donate bottles of drinking water to them．We can also raise money for them to help them dig more wells．（捐水或钱）In a word，let's stretch our helping hands to help those in need．（倡议）
Thanks for your joining!

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