Question

【题目】英语课上，你们开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place？”为主题的讨论，同学们把自己的想法写在卡片上。请结合卡片信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Learning投稿。

注意：1.短文必须包括卡片所给的信息，适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法；

2.文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；

3.词数：80-100（短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数）。

In our English class，we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】In our English class, we had a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place. We shared different ideas.

Some say it’s better to spend more time with family. The more we get together, the better we understand each other. Family members should share happiness and worries. For example, when they have problems, we should try to cheer them up. Others believe it’s important to give small presents to our family on their birthdays.

I think, showing love for family is necessary. If we help with housework, they may feel warmer. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. Though we’re young, we can do much to make a happier home.

【解析】

这是一篇图画作文．内容是汇报以"Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace？"为主题的讨论结果，并发表自己的观点．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：1. 确定主题——根据给出的主题进行作文。
2. 确定写作顺序——分三段，以总分总结构进行。
3. 确定每段内容：第一段，总起，介绍背景，使用给出的首句即可；第二段，根据给出的信息进行组织，并加上自己的内容；第三段，总结全文。
【高分句型】
1．The more we get together，the better we understand each other．
the+比较级，the+比较级 越…就越…
2．If we help with housework，they may feel warmer．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词may，从句用一般现在时．
3．①Though we're young，we can do much②to make a happier home．
①though虽然，引导的让步状语从句．
②动词不定式做目的状语．