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【题目】书面表达

71. 英语课上老师组织了一次以“What will you do if you want to build a happier home？”为主题的讨论，部分同学的想法被统计在表格里。请你根据表格的信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊投稿。

Lin Hai	spend more time with family
Peter	share happiness and worries
Tina	remember family birthdays
I	...

要求：(1)开头已给出，不计入总词数，不少于70词；(2)短文要包括表格所给的信息，适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法；(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息，如姓名、学校等。

In our English class, we have a discussion about what we will do to make home a happier place. Here are some students' ideas. Lin Hai thinks

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Answer 1

【答案】In_our_English_class,_we_have_a_discussion_about_what_we_will_do_to_make_home_a_happier_place._Here_are_some_students'_ideas._Lin_Hai_thinks we may spend more time with family. We can watch TV shows together or take a walk after dinner. Peter says we should share happiness and worries more. As for Tina, she thinks we'd better remember family birthdays and send them small gifts. If you do so, your family will be happy. In my opinion, we can help with some housework. Then your parents will feel you are no longer a little child.

In a word, we all want to have a happy home and it's also our duty to build one. So let's try our best to make all of us happy.

【解析】

英语课上老师组织了一次以“What will you do if you want to build a happier home？”为主题的讨论，部分同学的想法被统计在表格里。请你根据表格的信息，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊投稿。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前先要围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在和过去时态，注意时态和时间状语的搭配问题，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。