Question

【题目】书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

三年的初中生活,你对自己的表现一定有满意的方面和不满意的方面。假如你是林微,请参照以下提示,给你的学弟学妹们用英语写一篇毕业留言,希望对他们有所帮助。

	提示内容	提示词
对自己满意的方面	勤学好问,有良好的学习习惯;……	work hard,a good habit of
对自己不满意的方面	忙于学习,锻炼身体较少;……	be busy,do less sports
对学弟学妹的建议或希望	乐于助人,积极参加志愿者活动;……	be glad to,volunteer activities

注意:1.参照提示适当发挥;

2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名;

3.词数80左右(开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数)。

Dear boys and girls,

I’m Lin Wei.It’s my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear boys and girls,

I’m Lin Wei.It’s my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years.I am hard-working and have made great progress.I have developed many good habits of learning.I did well in the exams.However,I have problems,too.I spent more time online and I have become quite weak in my eyesight.What’s more,it’s also a pity that I did less sports because of hard work.

In the future I hope you can understand the saying,“A friend in need is a friend indeed”.So you should be glad to help others if someone is in trouble.I also hope you all can take an active part in some volunteer activities,such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment,helping disabled children and so on.

Thank you,my teachers and schoolmates.Wish my school more beautiful,and my teachers and schoolmates a happy life!

Yours,

Lin Wei

【解析】这是一篇图表作文。根据材料内容可知本文时态用到了一般现在时、过去时和现在完成时，人称主要为第一人称。在写作过程中，首先要将表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。然后条理清楚的写出对自己满意的方面、对自己不满意的方面、对学弟学妹的建议或希望，可适当增加相关细节，使意思表达更完整。可使用一些固定句式或短语，以便为文章增色。