题目内容
6.《21世纪英语报》正在举行英语征文比赛,请你以"Great Changes in Wenzhou"为题写一篇文章参加征文比赛,要点如下:1.使用公共自行车,…,改善了交通;
2.建设更多的公园,…,美化了环境;
3.公共场所不吸烟,…,人们更文明了; 4)…
要求:1.文章应包含以上要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3.文章长度约100词.
参考词汇:public bikes; traffic; environment; public place; more civilized(更文明的)
Great changes in Wenzhou
More than twenty years ago,Wenzhou was just a small,old and poor town.Most of people were farmers.There were few factories.The people didn't have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life.
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.The government has provided free public bikes,which has brought convenience to people's travel,but also greatly improved the traffic in the city.
Many people have cell phones and personal computers.People's living conditions have improved a lot.More parks have been built to improve people's quality of life and beautify the environment.
With the improvement of people's living standards,more and more public places do not smoke,people are more civilized.Thanks to the government's efforts.Wenzhou is becoming more and more beautiful..
分析 高分句型:
句型一:The government has provided free public bikes,which has brought convenience to people's travel,but also greatly improved the traffic in the city政府提供了免费的公共自行车,这给人们的出行带来了方便,也极大地改善了城市的交通.先行词是 public bikes,which引导的非限制性定语从句.
句型二:Wenzhou is becoming more and more beautiful 温州变得越来越美丽.more and more越来越…
解答 Great changes in Wenzhou
More than twenty years ago,Wenzhou was just a small,old and poor town.Most of people were farmers.There were few factories.The people didn't have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life.
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.The government has provided free public bikes,which has brought convenience to people's travel,but also greatly improved the traffic in the city.(使用公共自行车,改善了交通)【高分句型一】
Many people have cell phones and personal computers.People's living conditions have improved a lot.More parks have been built to improve people's quality of life and beautify the environment.(建设更多的公园,美化了环境)
With the improvement of people's living standards,don't smoke in the public places,people are more civilized.(公共场所不吸烟,人们更文明了)Thanks to the government's efforts.Wenzhou is becoming more and more beautiful.【高分句型二】
点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点,注意写作中人称和时态的使用,做到思路清晰,句式灵活,表达流畅,所以平时应多注意常考的作文形式,积累相关的短语和词汇
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