题目内容
【题目】书面表达
某校正在开展“走进新时代，争当合格中学生”的演讲比赛，请以“We act, we improve” 为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？ 演讲稿应包括以下内容：
1.学会自立，诚实友善，举止文明；
2.培养习惯，发展兴趣，不断创新；
3.关心他人，和谐相处，懂得感恩； 4. ……
要求：
1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加 2－3 分；
4.词数：80 词左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
We act, we improve
Ladies and gentlemen,
We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
【答案】We act, we improve
Ladies and gentlemen,
We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, we should learn to be independent and honest. We’re supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should have good habits. Habits play an important role in our life. We’d better develop our interests and the ability to create. Third, we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life. Last but not least, I think we should exercise more to keep healthy.
In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“We act，we improve”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈中学生除了学习课本知识之外，还应该做些什么？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I think……，First, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的应用。写作中注意多种句式交替运用，不要漏掉任何一个写作要点，注意叙述顺序符合逻辑关系。 可能用到的词组：learn to do sth., be supposed to do, be friendly to sb., play an important role in, had better, the ability to create, care more about等等。
高分句型：
1. We should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. 我们应该更加关心别人，感谢所有帮助过我们的人。
care more about更加关心，be thankful to对……感恩，who have helped us.为定语从句，修饰先行词the people。
2. In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve. 总之，我们行动越多，我们的提高就越好。
两个比较级的句子叠加，表示“越……越……”。
