题目内容
【题目】书面表达
以My best friend为题,字数60左右,包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,要点5请适当发挥1-2句,使其连贯、通顺。要点:
1.Nick是个帅气的美国男孩。他身高接近1.80米。
2.他总是乐于助人,他经常主动提供给我帮助。
3.他擅长画画,在一次绘画比赛中画的最好。
4.他还痴迷于收集车模。看到他的收藏(collections),我和小伙伴们都惊呆了!
5.他长大后想当一名社会工作者,这样他可以……
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【答案】
My best friend
Nick is a smart American boy. He is almost 1.80metres.He’s always willing to help others. He often offers me help. He is good at drawing. Once he drew the best in the drawing competition. He’s also crazy about collecting model cars. My buddies and I were surprised at his collections. He would like to be a social worker when he grows up. He hopes to help more people.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文给出了写作的提纲,在写作时要构思好文章的结构,注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整,表达准确,注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。
写作亮点:这篇作文结构清晰完整,表达准确流利,要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Once he drew the best in the drawing competition. He’s also crazy about collecting model cars. My buddies and I were surprised at his collections.等等。