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3．最近，你们班就"幸福是什么"进行了一次讨论，学生们发表了各自的看法．

Tom	如果少看电视，多运动，拥有健康的饮食，感到幸福．
Kate	当我们采取措施减少污染，公园里能看到花、听到鸟儿歌唱就感到幸福．
Mary	当我们过上绿色生活时，感到幸福．
Millie	组织一次慈善义演，帮助贫困地区的儿童重返校园，为他们捐钱，送玩具．
你自己	…（回忆你经历的使你感到幸福的一件事情．）

要求：1．最后一点要展开合理的想象，进行适当的发挥．
2．词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
What is happiness？
Happiness is different to different people．But it is important in our daily life．It is always around you if you put your heart into it．
Tom thinks he will feel happy if he watches less TV，take more exercise and have a healthy diet．
Kate thinks she will feel happy if the government takes action（does something） to reduce pollution and she can hear birds sing and can see beautiful flowers in the park..Mary thinks she will feel happy if we live a green life．Millie thinks she will feel happy if she can organize a charity show，help children in poor areas return to school，donate money to them and give （send） them toys．I think I will feel happy if I can spend time with my parents and my friends，I will be happy．
When we think of these things，we realize that happiness is all around us．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Tom ①he will feel happy ②if he watches less TV，take more exercise and have a healthy diet汤姆认为如果少看电视，多运动，拥有健康的饮食，就会感到幸福．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则
【高分句型二】
Kate thinks①she will feel happy②if the government ③takes action to reduce pollution and she can hear birds sing and can see beautiful flowers in the park凯特认为当我们采取措施减少污染，公园里能看到花、听到鸟儿歌唱就感到幸福．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则
③take action to do sth采取行动做某事

解答 What is happiness？
Happiness is different to different people．But it is important in our daily life．It is always around you if you put your heart into it．
Tom thinks he will feel happy if he watches less TV，take more exercise and have a healthy diet．【高分句型一】
Kate thinks she will feel happy if the government takes action to reduce pollution and she can hear birds sing and can see beautiful flowers in the park．【高分句型二】．Mary thinks she will feel happy if we live a green life．Millie thinks she will feel happy if she can organize a charity show，help children in poor areas return to school，donate money to them and give （send） them toys．（同学们的看法）I think I will feel happy if I can spend time with my parents and my friends，I will be happy．（我的看法）
When we think of these things，we realize that happiness is all around us．

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