Question

【题目】书面表达：

写出你的某一次旅游经历，词数在80左右。

Answer 1

【答案】It was sunny today. We went to New York City. We visited Central Park. There were many people on vacation there. Then we went shopping. The supermarket was full of people. There were some great special things there and we bought some. In the afternoon we went to the zoo. We saw many animals. They were very interesting. At seven o'clock, we went back home. We were very tired, but we were happy.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，话题是写出你的某一次旅游经历。本文主要时态是一般过去式时。写作时，首先列好要点提纲，然后连词成句，连句成篇，注意使用连词，写完以后再阅读一遍，检查是否有语法、单词拼写等错误，或不合适的地方。注意尽量避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意： 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在80左右。

（一）列要点列提纲：今天天气晴朗。我们去了纽约。我们参观了中央公园。那里有很多人度假。然后我们去购物了。超市里挤满了人。那里有一些特别的东西，我们买了一些。下午我们去了动物园。我们看见许多动物。他们非常有趣。七点钟，我们回家了。我们很累，但我们很高兴。（二）连词成句，连句成篇，注意使用连词；（三）写完以后再阅读一遍，检查是否有语法、单词拼写等错误，或不合适的地方。