书面表达母爱情深.母爱无价,学会感恩.学会回报.某英语网站举办以“My mother 为题的英语征文活动.请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息.写一篇短文.介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事. 提示:1．短文应包括导图中的全部信息.条理清楚.行文连贯.段落分明, 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名. 3．词数不少于80.开头已给出:不计人� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。

提示：1．短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；

2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。

3．词数不少于80，开头已给出：不计人总词数。

My mother

　　We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．________________

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解析：

　　One Possible Version

My mother

　　We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．

　　She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．

　　When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most, I think．

　　评分意见：

　　(一)总体原则

　　考查学生综合运用语言知识的能力，注重语言表达的意义和流畅性。

　　(二)内容要点

　　1．Introduction

　　①age　②job　③look　④ability　⑤hobby

　　2．What she did for you

　　3．What you will do for her

　　(三) 评分档次

　　1．第一档(13－15分)

　　信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。

　　2．第二档(10－12分)