题目内容

书面表达(共15分)

假如你叫张红,新学期开始,请根据下面的表格写一篇50词左右的英语短文,向你的朋友做一下自我介绍,可做适当发挥,开头已给出。

中文名

张红

英文名

Jane

国籍

中国

性别

年龄

13

班级

七年级二班(Class 2, Grade 7)

喜爱的学科

音乐

原因

有趣、使人轻松

爱好

打网球、看电视

Hello,boys and girls.

Hello, boys and girls. My name is Zhang Hong, a Chinese girl, and my English name is Jane. I am thirteen years old. Now , I am in Class 2, Grade 7. My favorite subject is music because it is fun and makes me feel relaxing when I am enjoying it. At the same time , I have many hobbies such as playing volleyball and watching TV. Would you like to make friends with me? I think you will like me if you get to know me.

【解析】

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据表格中的一些信息代表张红向朋友做出自我介绍,根据人物类介绍的作文要求,我们首先要把人称确定为第一人称,即I,时态要使用一般现在时态,这也是初中七年级最长使用的时态;句型要尽量使用简单句,因为七年级的学生对学习素材的掌握较少,而且对作文有恐惧心理;再结合表格,我们可以得出以下作文中的必备信息即:

1,张红的姓名年龄,国籍及所在班级。

2,张红最喜欢的学科及其原因。

3,张红的业余爱好。

4, 适当的发挥,替张红发出交友的邀请。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文,作者按照题目的要求将这个表格里的内容给我们详细的叙述了出来。语言层次感强,语言组织巧妙使用,长短句结合使用,句式变换流畅。并且使用了同位语,a Chinese girl; makes me feel relaxing ,make sb do sth 和feel adj等宾语补足语的不同形式; at the same time ,such as, make friends with固定短语,以及Would you like to do的句型,because引导的复合句,when I am enjoying it时间状语从句为文章增色不少。

考点:话题作文。

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