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9.假如你叫Tom,在北京第八中学读书,你在这里交了许多朋友.你认为经常锻炼能保持健康,你最大的兴趣是打篮球,经常在周末和朋友们一起打篮球,下个月学校将举行篮球比赛,你打算参加,并且希望你们班取得第一名.你长大后的心愿是成为一名篮球运动员.请根据以上信息,写一篇70词左右的作文.I'm Tom,and I study in No.8 Middle School in Beijing.I have many friends here.I think exercising more can keep healthy.So I often play sports.What interests me most is playing basketball.I usually play with my friends on weekends.Our school will hold a basketball match next month.I'm going to join,and I hope our classwill win.When I grow up,I want to be a basketball player like Kobe..
分析 【高分句型一】
I think exercising more can keep healthy我认为多锻炼能保持健康.
think后是省略that的宾语从句.
【高分句型二】
When I grow up,I want to be a basketball player like Kobe当我长大了,我想成为像科比一样的篮球运动员.
when引导的时间状语从句.
解答 I'm Tom,and I study in No.8 Middle School in Beijing.(个人信息)I have many friends here.I think exercising more can keep healthy.【高分句型一】So I often play sports.What interests me most is playing basketball.I usually play with my friends on weekends.(爱好)Our school will hold a basketball match next month.I'm going to join,and I hope our class will win.When I grow up,I want to be a basketball player like Kobe.【高分句型二】(梦想)
点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来,在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体.同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点.
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