Question

16．最近，你班同学就"课间是否播放音乐"这个话题展开了讨论．请你根据下表所提供的信息，用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及个人的看法、建议．

大部分同学观点	部分同学观点	你的看法
1 使学生放松． 2为下一堂课做好准备． 3能给大家带来快乐．	1 时间太短，达不到预期的效果 2课间需要的是安静．	…

注意：1文章必须包括表格中所有内容，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3词数：80-100个．
参考词汇：expected （预期的） effect （效果）
Recently a discussion was held about whether music should be played during the break or not．The opinions are divided．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①What's more，②listening to music also③makes us feel happy再者，听音乐让我们感到开心．
①What's more再者．作为插入语．
②动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数．
③make sb do sth让某人做某事．
【高分句型二】
Besides，I①suggest choosing some music ②that is suitable for middle school students另外，我建议选择一些适合初中生的音乐．
①suggest doing sth 建议做某事
②that作为关系词的定语从句，修饰music，that作为从句主语．

解答 Recently a discussion was held about whether music should be played during the break or not．The opinions are divided．Most of the students think that music should be played．Music can make us feel relaxed after hard study（使学生放松．）．Besides，this can help us get ready for the next class．（为下一堂课做好准备）What's more，listening to music also makes us feel happy．【高分句型一】（能给大家带来快乐）
   However，other students don't think so．In their opinion，they can't get the expected effect from playing music，because the class break time is too short．（时间太短，达不到预期的效果）Also，students need a quiet study environment．（课间需要的是安静）
   In my opinion，it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break．In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest．Besides，I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students．【高分句型二】（个人的看法、建议）

点评 写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．