Question

1．当今社会，浪费和奢侈消费变得越来越严重，为创建文明城，泰州市启动了"节俭生活，从我做起"行动．请你写一篇以"Saving"为题的80字左右的短文．
内容包括：
1、几种浪费现象：在校浪费食物；离开教室时不关灯；洗手后不关水龙头．
2、生活中你做过的有关节俭的事：购物时用布袋替代塑料袋；步行或骑行去上学…
3、你对节俭的看法（至少发挥两点）．
Saving
Taizhou government has called on the citizens to do something for saving so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．                                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom．
句中"when they leave the classroom"为"when"引导的时间状语从句，句中短语有"forget to do sth 忘记去做某事"．这句话意为：有的学生经常在离开教室的时候忘记关灯．
高分句型二：
I hope there will be more and more Taizhou citizens to keep saving from every little thing．
句中"there will be more and more Taizhou citizens to keep saving from every little thing"为宾语从句，从句中涉及的短语有："比较级+and+比较级"意为"越来越…"；"keep doing sth"意为"一直做某事"．这句话意为：我希望越来越多的泰州市民从小事做起，一直节约．

解答 Saving
    Taizhou government has called on the citizens to do something for saving so that we can enjoy our happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．（点明主旨）
    In our daily life，we can see different kinds of wasting．For example，some students waste food in school．Some students often forget to turn off the lights when they leave the classroom．【高分句型一】Others even don't turn off the tap after washing their hands．（浪费的现象）
    As for me，I am trying my best to keep saving．When I go shopping，I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags．And I go to school on foot or ride bikes instead of taking my parents'car．Besides，I save water and food in my everyday life，and try to recycle the energy．（我做的节俭的事）
    In a word，saving is very necessary and important．We should keep saving as possible as we can．I hope there will be more and more Taizhou citizens to keep saving from every little thing．【高分句型二】（我对节俭的看法）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．