Question

10．假如你叫大明，收到了你的英国朋友Tony的来信，信中他很关心四川雅安地震后学生的情况．请你根据他的来信内容写一封回信，感谢他对灾区学生的关心，回答他的问题，并谈谈你的感受．

提示词语：thank you，care to，go on，government，offer，encourage，brave
Dear Daming，
I'm sorry to hear that a big earthquake happened in Ya'an，Sichuan．Some school buildings broke down in the earthquake and many students couldn't go to school．But I know the government is trying their best to help them．And Chinese people are so strong and brave that they aren't afraid of anything difficult．Can the students go on studying now？Please tell me more about them．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Tony

Dear Tony，
I'm glad to hear from you．Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya'an，Sichuan．Yes，the students can go on studying now．It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．But as quickly as possible，the government helped them find new places to go on studying．And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave．I think they are not alone．China is a big family and love is just around them
Best wishes．YoursDaming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是给朋友写一封回信，感谢他对灾区学生的关心，回答他的问题，并谈谈你的感受．注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时及一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
来信的大意是：我很抱歉听到四川雅安发生大地震，一些学校建筑在地震中倒塌了，很多学生不能去上学了．但我知道政府尽力帮助他们．中国人是如此的坚强和勇敢，他们不怕任何困难．现在学生们能继续学习了吗？请告诉我更多关于他们的事情．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1感谢关心
2回答问题：现在学生们能继续学习了吗？
3其他更多信息．
4感受

常用到的重点短语：
thank you for  因为…感谢你
as…as possible 尽可能…
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
offer sb sth 提供某物给某人
encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．
it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
2．But①as quickly as possible，the government②helped them find new places ③to go on studying．
①as…as possible 尽可能…
②help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
③动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 Dear Tony，
I'm very glad to hear from you．
Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya'an，Sichuan．（感谢关心）Yes，the students can go on studying now．（回答问题）It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．【高分句型】But as quickly as possible，the government helped them find new places to go on studying．【高分句型】And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave．（更多信息--政府和热心人帮忙）I think they are not alone．China is a big family and love is just around them．（感受）
Best wishes．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．