Question

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“餐桌手机控”是指那些在餐桌上先拍照后用餐、并在用餐过程中扔只关注手机的群体。然而，最近发表的一篇科学研究表明：分享或关注食物的照片会使人们对食物的满意程度下降。此外，“餐桌手机控”的现象也疏远了人与人之间的距离。

请根据上述内容，以Not taking photos of food makes us happier为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

Not taking photos of food makes us happier

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Not taking photos of food makes us happier

Nowadays, we can often see people take out mobiles and take photos when they gather together with family or friends in restaurants. Later they post the photos onto microblog or WeChat, and check the mobiles during the meal.

However, a recent study suggests spending time taking photos of food makes the food less satisfying and it is not good for our health. Besides, checking mobiles all the time doesn’t make people feel close to each other.

So, why not stop taking photos? Let the food be delicious and share your life with people around you.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，叙述的是现在社会存在的想象----在餐桌上给食物拍照。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：when they......;a recent study suggests.....;why not ......?Let the food be......等句式的应用。要注意上下文的衔接，这里用了nowadays, later，however, besides, so使句子过渡自然。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了一些社会现象，接下来叙述餐桌上拍照的弊端，最后建议停止给食物拍照。短文用了checking mobiles all the time动名词短语作主语，用了短语take photos, spend time doing, be good for, stop doing等，增加了句子的亮点。

考点：提纲作文。