Question

2．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"A difficult choice I had to make．"（以"一个艰难的选择"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
Using the following points as a reference．（以下问题供参考）
1．Have you ever had a difficult choice to make？
2．What made it so difficult for you？
3．What was your final decision？
4．Do you think it is a right decision？
Our lives are the sum of all ourchoices．The decisions wemake today，may very wellplay a critical role in our future tomorrow．When I wasthirteen，my mother alwayswanted me a girl who was good at school work．However，I was keen onplaying the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，which was notallowed by her．As a result，we quarreledwith each other a lot．As time passed by，I graduallyfound that one should be knowledgeable，no matter what he would bein the future．I decided towork hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby．Knowledge ispower，and I think thechoice I've made must be wise one．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①When I was thirteen，my mother always wanted me a girl②who was good at school work．当我十三岁的时候，我的妈妈总是想要我成为一个在学校工作的女孩．
①when引导的时间状语从句
②who引导的定语从句，修饰先行词girl，在从句中作逻辑主语．
高分句型二：
However，I ①was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，②which③was not allowed by her．然而，我非常热衷于玩鼓，不喜欢学习，这是她不允许的．
①be keen on doing sth热衷于做某事
②which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个句子．
③一般过去时的被动语态，was/were+过去分词

解答 Our lives are the sum of all our choices．The decisions we make today，may very well play a critical role in our future tomorrow．【指出选择的重要性】When I was thirteen，my mother always wanted me a girl who was good at school work．【高分句型一】However，I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，which was not allowed by her．【高分句型二】As a result，we quarreled with each other a lot．As time passed by，I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable，no matter what he would be in the future．I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby．【做出正确选择的过程】Knowledge is power，and I think the choice I've made must be wise one．【总结全文】

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇