Question

【题目】书面表达：

以“Sandy’s lifestyle”为题，写篇短文。

要点：1. Sandy每天吃各种各样健康的食物来保持健康。

2. 她经常吃鸡蛋、面包和牛奶作为早餐。这顿早餐帮助她很好的开始一天的生活。课间吃些水果, 如…

3. 她午餐和晚餐吃… 她每天还需要喝八杯水。

4．但是她很少锻炼。她想改变她的生活方式。

5．现在她计划每天散步半小时. 在空余时间，她希望…

注意：1. 文章须包括所有内容要点，语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 第二三要点发挥发挥2到3种水果、食物。

3. 字数70个左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Sandy’s lifestyle

Sandy is 12 years old. She eats all kinds of healthy food to keep healthy. For her breakfast, she often has eggs, bread and milk. This helps her start a good day. She often eats some fruit during the break. Such as apples, bananas, oranges and so on. She often eats hamburgers, chicken, fish and rice for lunch and supper. Every day she wants to drink eight glasses of water. But she seldom exercises, she wants to change her lifestyle. She plans to walk for 30 minutes every day and go swimming twice a week in her free time.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Sandy的生活方式。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She is ...，She often eats...；及She wants to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Sandy健康的生活方式，接下来介绍三餐分别吃什么食品，来保持健康饮食，但话头一转，强调她缺乏锻炼，计划加强体育锻炼。牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达有逻辑性，更富有条理。