Question

【题目】书面表达。

生活中有很多东西能够影响我们的情绪，比如天气，颜色，环境等等。如果我们遇到心情不好的时候，应该怎么办？写一篇70词左右的短文。

提示词（不分先后）：rainy, color, noisy, in bad mood, angry, sad…

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to control our feelings

Do you get angry when your friends sing loudly when you are trying to work? When it rains for a few days, are you often in a bad mood? If you do, you need to control your feelings and stop getting angry so easily.

Controlling feelings is important to us all. If we control our feelings well, we can find what caused the problem and then we can find better ways to solve the problem. Also controlling feelings can help to make friends with more people.

How can we control our feelings?. Every time you get angry, write down why you are angry. Read it later and you will control yourself. Ask your friends to stop talking to you when you get angry. This will teach you not to be angry. When you get angry, walk away from the problem and go somewhere to do something different.

If everyone can control our bad feelings, our lives will be better and happier.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以“遇到心情不好的时间，应该怎么办”为话题写一篇短文。短文应该包括：描述现象、谈论危害、解决措施等方面。简单描述周围环境对人的情绪的影响，说明坏的影响对生活、学习的危害，并提出一些好的建议。短文用一般现在时态，可以借助一些情态动词帮助表达。

写作亮点：本文第一段描述环境对情绪的影响，指出人们需要控制自己的坏情绪；第二段描述控制情绪的重要性；第三段讲述怎样控制我们的情绪；最后是结尾句。短文条理分明，层次清楚；语言通顺，语义连贯。短文用到了大量的带有时间状语从句的复合句、条件状语从句的复合句、宾语从句的复合句，用到了大量的短语和恰当的句型结构。这些都增强了文章的表达力和感染力，使短文生动具体，为本文增色不少。