题目内容
16．假设某中学生英文报开展关于School life变化的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以Changes in our school life为题，用英语为该报写一篇稿件，简述学校、课堂及课外生活中的若干变化，展望未来生活及如何为此努力．| 变化 | 过去 | 现在 | ||
| 学校环境 | 低矮的教学楼 | 高高的教学楼 | …（自拟一点） | |
| 课堂学习 | 只是听老师讲 | 师生可以交流 | …（自拟一点） | |
| 课外活动 | 在教室里读书 | 在校园里看书 | …（自拟一点） | |
| 感想 | …（自拟一点自己的感想及学习理想） | |||
1．表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译．
2．词数：90字左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
3．表达中请勿提及本人姓名和学校．
Changes in our school life
With the development of teaching reform（改革），great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years．Our school life has changed a lot．In the past，our school was small．There used to be low teaching buildings．We just listened to the teachers in class．After class，we only did some reading in the classroom．
However，things have changed a lot．We can see tall classroom buildings in our school．And there's a big garden in front of the school library．In class，we can discuss any question with our teachers．We're not afraid of expressing our ideas before the whole class．We can do some reading in the school yard if we like．Moreover，we have colourful after-school activities now．
I think our school life is becoming more and more colorful．I hope I can make great progress with the help of our teachers．
分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以Changes in our school life为题简述学校、课堂及课外生活中的若干变化，展望未来生活及如何为此努力．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．过去；低矮的教学楼，只是听老师讲，在教室里读书
2．现在；高高的教学楼，师生可以交流，在校园里看书
3．感想．
常用到的重点短语：
used to do sth 过去常常
be afraid of 害怕…
比较级+比较级 越来越…
make progress 取得进步
【高分句型】
1．We can do some reading in the school yard if we like．
if所引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词can，从句用一般现在时．
2．I think ①our school life is becoming ②more and more colorful．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②比较级+比较级 越来越…
3．I hop①e I can②make great progress③with the help of our teachers．
①省略了引导词that的宾语从句，作为hope的宾语．
②make progress 取得进步
③with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下
解答 Changes in our school life
With the development of teaching reform，great changes have taken place in our school in the past few years．Our school life has changed a lot．
In the past，our school was small．There used to be low teaching buildings．（低矮的教学楼）We just listened to the teachers in class．（只是听老师讲）After class，we only did some reading in the classroom．（在教室里读书）
However，things have changed a lot．We can see tall classroom buildings in our school．And there's a big garden in front of the school library．（高高的教学楼和大花园）In class，we can discuss any question with our teachers．We're not afraid of expressing our ideas before the whole class．（师生可以交流）We can do some reading in the school yard if we like．【高分句型】（在校园里看书）Moreover，we have colourful after-school activities now．（精彩的课外活动）
I think our school life is becoming more and more colorful．【高分句型】I hope I can make great progress with the help of our teachers【高分句型】．（我的感想）
点评 试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文．要求介绍学校生活的该变．本文要写的材料比较具体，我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．该话题是中考常见 话题之一，该话题贴近学生生活，更容易引起学生的共鸣．这篇短文内容切题，能熟练的应用used to do 句式，注意到了不同时态的应用变化，一开始的现在完成时态，之后的一般过去时及一般现在时运用的都十分的恰当．
| 老师表现 | 1工作努力，认真； 2教学耐心，待人友好． |
| 留存记忆 | 1 严格要求也关爱学生； 2 师生和睦相处； 3 给予学习上和生活上的帮助； 4 学生学业取得了进步． |
2．可适当发挥，增加细节，使语句连贯通顺；
3．文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校；
4.80-100词，信的首尾已写好，不计入总数．
My dear teacher，
Leaving you and the lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．
Dear my teacher，
Leaving you-lovely junior schoollife，I have so many words from my heart to say．
Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years．I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave． Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best wishes to you!
Yours
TuTu．
| 以前 | 易怒，喜欢和人争论． |
| 现在 | 将大部分的精力投入到学习中，在学习上已经取得 了很大的进步．能很耐心的辅导同学的作业．加入Helping Hands Club已有两年．经常为贫困地区的儿童募集书本． |
| 愿望 | … |
你的愿望需要用2至3句话作适当发挥．词数80个左右，发言稿开头已经给出，不计入总词数．发言稿中不准出现真实校名和姓名．
Dear teachers and friends，
How time flies!I'm happy to be here to share my happiness and progress with you．I used to get angry easily and liked to argue with others．Now I put most of my effort into my study．So I have made great progress in my study．I am patient enough to help my classmates with their homework．I have been in Helping Hands Club for two years．I often raise some books for the children in poor areas．I want to enter No.1 High School this year．I hope my dream can come true．
That's all for my speech．Thank you for listening．．
| 阅读现状 | 一些国人不常阅读；有些人声称没空，有些人认为没用． |
| 你的看法 | 阅读很重要，因为…（至少两点） |
| 你的打算 | …（至少两点） |
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范．
3．文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名．
Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．
However，some Chinese people seldom read in their spare time．Some say that they are too busy to do some reading，others think that it's useless to read．
But I think reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．
I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．
-________ is 355994127．（ ）
| A． | I | B． | He | C． | It | D． | She |