Question

假设你是一名已经移民到美国的学生Tim，在电视上，你看到中国出现了H7N9禽流感(H7N9 bird flu),目前已经有87名禽流感患者，你为你在中国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封e-mail询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。

要点:

询问

他的健康状况

他们学校有无H7N9

他们是否还在上学

建议

尽量待在家里，少去人多的地方；

勤洗手，讲卫生；

多开窗，保持空气新鲜；

多吃水果蔬菜

Dear Mike，

From the TV I know H7N9 bird flu have been discovered in China. 87 people have been confirmed to be infected with the H7N9 bird flu. I am worried about you.

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So far, the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you will be OK.

Yours,

Tim

 

Answer 1

From the TV I know H7N9 bird flu have been discovered in China. 87 people have been confirmed to be infected with the H7N9 bird flu. I am worried about you.Are you OK?Are there any H7N9 bird flu cases in your school ?Do you still have to go to school every day?

To stay away from the disease,you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people .Wash your hands more of ten to keep them clean .open the window to have more fresh air in the room .and eat more fruit and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong.

So far, the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you will be OK.

Yours,

Tim

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用征求建议的语气。根据提示的内容发展，按询问及给出的建议。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，从询问H7N9的情况再到给笔友提出建议，第二段给笔友提出建议表达对笔友的关心。此处用了you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people这些句型给文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。