Question

书面表达（满分20分）

根据提示，以“Tom's Lifestyle"为题写一篇60字左右的作文。

提示：1.通常在家吃早饭，早饭有鸡蛋，面包和牛奶。

2.中午在学校吃饭，午饭有米饭，肉和蔬菜，有时还有鱼。

3.晚饭通常和家人一起吃。晚饭非常美味可口。（tasty)

Tom's lifestyle

Answer 1

Tom's Lifestyle

Tom is my good friend He usually eats breakfast at home, He eats egg, bread and milk for breakfast.He has lunch at school,He has rice, meat and vegetables for lunch and sometimes He has fish. He usually eats dinner with my family together.The dinner was very delicious. (tasty)

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍汤姆的生活方式。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is ...， He usually eats...；等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了汤姆不健康的生活方式，接下来介绍此处用了 He usually eats dinner with my family together等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。