Question

4．使用所给的词语，编写一个意义相对完整的语段．
提示词：music，popular，feel，when，sing
要求：（1）使用全部提示词，并在语段中用下划波浪线"-"标出提示词：
（2）语段具有一个相对合理的主题意义：
（3）词数为50词左右，最多不超过80词．
Different people have different hobbies．I like listening to music．
Listening to music gives me the sense of happiness．It can make me feel happy when I am sad．I like popular music best because it is relaxing．I usually listen tomusic on my way home and school．Sometimes Ialso try to sing somesongs．
I like music．I hope you will like it，too．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It can make me feel happy when I am sad．
句中"when I am sad"为时间状语从句，句中短语有"make sb do sth 使某人做某事"．这句话意为：当我难过的时候，它能让我觉得快乐．
高分句型二：
I like popular music best because it is relaxing．
句中"because it is relaxing"为原因状语从句，这句话意为：我最喜欢流行音乐，因为它令人放松．

解答 Different people have different hobbies．I like listening to music．（开篇点题）
Listening to music gives me the sense of happiness．It can make me feel happy when I am sad．【高分句型一】I like popular music best because it is relaxing．【高分句型二】I usually listen to music on my way home and school．Sometimes I also try to sing some songs．（我喜欢音乐的原因、类型等）
I like music．I hope you will like it，too．（总结全文）

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