Question

【题目】请根据下表中的信息用英文介绍你的好友Lily。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，可做适当发挥。词数100字左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

外貌	圆脸，笑眯眯的大眼睛；比我矮一点；带着小圆眼镜，让她看上去很机灵。
特点	1. 礼貌的女孩，诚实；我信任她，真正的朋友，因为……。当我忧伤时，她总是关心我，而且仔细倾听我的问题，……。 2．有幽默感，擅长讲滑稽的笑话；和她在一起，我很少感到……。 3. 喜欢DIY，…… 3．愿意和别人分享东西，帮助人时总有耐心，长大后……。

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

Answer 1

【答案】My good friend

I would like to tell you something about my close friend Lily.

She has a round face and big, smiling eyes. She is a little shorter than I. She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart.

She is a polite and honest girl. I trust her because she never lies. She is my real friend. When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully.

She also has a good sense of humor and is good at telling funny jokes. I seldom get bored with her.

She also likes DIY. She once personally made her mother a music box for her birthday. This made his mother very happy.

She is willing to share things with others. She is always patient when helping others. She said“ she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.“

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a little，a pair of，trust sb.，care about，listen to，a good sense of humor，be good at，get bored，be willing to，share with，would like to do，grow up等。而She often wears a pair of small round glasses, so she looks very smart./ When I am sad, she always cares about me and listens to my problems carefully./ She said she would like to be a volunteer to help more people when she grows up.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。