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11．随着扬州经济的发展，私家车的数量不断攀升，同时我们的空气污染越发严重．去年冬天雾霾（the thick haze）天气接二连三出现，生活环境日趋恶化．就此，你班展开讨论美丽扬州应该从何做起．请根据下面提示写一篇短文，向报社投稿．

扬州现状	美丽扬州从我做起	未来展望
1．车辆越来越多 2．空气越来越差 3．…	1．出门做公交 2．… 3．…	1．水更清，天更蓝 2．… 3．…．

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名．
100词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）
With the development of Yangzhou，more and more families have cars．                        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
And many people got sick because of the polluted air．许多人由于空气污染而生病．got sick 生病；because of 因为．
高分句型二
 If each of us tries our best to protect our environment，we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers．如果我们每个人都尽力保护我们的环境，我们将享受更蓝的天空和更清洁的河流．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 With the development of Yangzhou，more and more families have cars．However，the environment of our city is becoming worse and worse．Last winter，we experienced several days of the worst air pollution in history．And many people got sick because of the polluted air【高分句型一，注意固定词组的使用】．【要点一，扬州现状】
As the students of this ancient city，we should take actions to beautify our hometown．We can take buses to go out； we can ask our relatives not to drive cars as often as possible．What's more，we can call on the whole society to plant more trees．【要点二，美丽扬州从我做起】
If each of us tries our best to protect our environment，we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．Yangzhou will be more suitable and comfortable to live in．【要点三，未来展望】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．