Question

请根据提示内容，以“My best friend”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文.(表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。)

内容要点如下：

1.最好的朋友是汤姆；

2.长得又高又瘦，戴着小而圆的眼镜；看起来很聪明；

3.慷慨大方且乐于助人，经常在公交车上给别人让座。

4.酷爱体育，擅长打篮球；每周二下午练习打篮球；姚明是他的偶像(hero)；

5. 长大后……(2-3句)

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Answer 1

I have a friend. His name is Tom. He is my best friend. He is both tall and thin. He uaually wears small and round glasses. He looks quite clever. Tom is generous .He is willing to share things with his friends .He is always ready to help people. For example, he often gives his seat to others on the bus. He loves sports very much and good at basketball. He practices playing basketball every Tuesday afternoon. His hero is Yao Ming. He says he is going to be a professional basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up . He wants to play basketball for national team. He believes his dream will come true one day.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以My best friend为题，根据所给要点写一篇80词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般现在时态书写，可以用第三人称。一点要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，并且要围绕主题适当发挥，写两三个有关长大以后的句子。

【亮点说明】该文中以下几个句子用得很好。①He is both tall and thin.② He is willing to share things with his friends .③ He is always ready to help people.

考点：提纲作文。