题目内容
7.假如你叫张伟,不久前在网上认识了北京的学生,李伟.请根据提示,给李伟写一封邮件,介绍自己的一些情况.提示1.15岁,中学生,住在秦皇岛,父母是教师.2.喜欢旅游和游泳3.对英语感兴趣,会唱一些英文歌曲4.暑假去北京参加夏令营,希望能见到李伟.要求=.所写短文须包括以上所有提示内容,可适当发挥2.文中不得出现真实的人名.3.词数60-80(不包括开头、结尾所给出的词).
Dear Li Wei,
I'm glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Wei.I'm 15.I'm a middle school student.I live in Qinhuangdao with my parents.They are both teachers.
My favorite hobby is traveling.I have been to many places.I also like swimming.After school I often go swimming with my classmates.
I'm interested in English,and can sing some English songs.However,my English is not very good in my class.
On summer vacation,I'll go to Beijing for summer camp.I hope I'll meet you then.
Yours
Zhang Wei.
分析 高分句型:
句型一:
After school I often go swimming with my classmates.放学后我经常和同学一起去游泳.After school放学后,做时间状语.主语是I,often经常,一般现在时态.go swimming去游泳.固定搭配.with和,表示伴随状态.with my classmates和我的同学.
句型二:
I'm interested in English,and can sing some English songs.我对英语感兴趣,能唱一些英文歌曲.be interested in对…感兴趣.主语是I,一般现在时态,因此用be动词am与I连用.and表示并列成分.sing some English songs唱一些英文歌.
解答 Dear Li Wei,(收信人)
I'm glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Wei.I'm 15.I'm a middle school student.I live in Qinhuangdao with my parents.They are both teachers.(基本情况)
My favorite hobby is traveling.I have been to many places.I also like swimming.After school I often go swimming with my classmates.【高分句型一】(兴趣爱好)
I'm interested in English,and can sing some English songs.【高分句型二】(特长)However,my English is not very good in my class.(不擅长的课程)
On summer vacation,I'll go to Beijing for summer camp.I hope I'll meet you then.(愿望)
Yours
Zhang Wei(写信人)
点评 写作时要明确要点,做到思路清晰,句式灵活,表达流畅,语法正确,结合要求,注意作文题材,不要写跑题.日常积累一些短语和词句.