Question

7．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿．要点提示如下：
（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞．
（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞．
（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友．
（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡．
（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但…
参考词汇：跳广场舞 do square dancing （对某人）有意见 have a complaint （against sb．）
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个．
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥．

Boys and girls，
I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about my grandma．
A few months ago，my grandma went to do square dancing after supper．Since then，she has been in love with square dancing．Now，she is much healthier than before．What's more，she has a lot of friends．However，some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing．They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night．
In my opinion，people can do square dancing becauseit is a good way to keep healthy．But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 根据题干可知：这是一篇提纲作文．主要以发言稿的形式来进行写作．写作要点：介绍奶奶喜欢广场舞的事情，给奶奶带来的益处，以及邻居的意见和我的观点．
人称：第三人称为主；
时态：一般现在时态为主；
主要短语：
be in love with；爱上；
What's more；而且；
have a complaint；抱怨；
a good way to do…；做…的好方法；
keep healthy；保持健康；
make a lot of noise．制造很多噪音，太吵；
高分句型：
1．Now，she is much healthier than before．
现在，她比以前健康多了．
比较连词than，可知这是一个含有比较级的句子．much+形容词比较级+than+比较的对象．
2．They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night．
他们认为音乐是如此大声，他们不能在晚上入睡．
本句主要运用了so…that…句型．表示：如此…以至于…引导结果状语从句
3．they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise．
他们应该考虑别人的感受，他们不应该制造太多的噪音．
and 连接两个并列分句，分别叙述了应该怎样做，不应该怎样做．

解答 Boys and girls，
   I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about my grandma．   
   A few months ago，my grandma went to do square dancing after supper．＜介绍奶奶何时开始跳广场舞．＞Since then，she has been in love with square dancing．＜奶奶喜欢上了广场舞．＞【高分句型1】Now，she is much healthier than before．What's more，she has a lot of friends．＜跳广场舞，给奶奶带来的好处．＞
   However，some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing．【高分句型2】They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night．＜邻居们的意见＞
   In my opinion，people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy．【高分句型3】But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise．＜我的看法．＞
   That's all．Thank you!

点评 本题主要考查提纲作文．写此类题目的作文，首先审题：要读懂题干内容和要求，抓住要点，注意文体，以及写作的人称和时态．然后根据提纲：抓住文章的中心，根据题干信息内容，考虑所要选用的单词，短语，句型．最后再修改，润色全文．