Question

9．有些同学常因作弊而被通报批评，请针对这种不良行为结合下面图片内容，用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行交流，并谈谈你的看法和建议．
注意：（1）文章必须包括图片中的信息，可适当增加细节．
（2）分析作弊的原因，谈谈你的看法，提出建议，至少两条．
（3）词数：80～100．
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数．
短文首句：Nowadays some students were criticized because of cheat．
参考词汇：批评 criticize作弊 cheat
In the picture，we can see some students copying the answers from others while some are doing by themselves．
They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort．Meanwhile，some are under great pressure，so they are afraid of failing in the exam．We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study，and the future is full of sharp competition and any success achieved by cheating won't last long．
In my opinion，we should study hard to get good grades．In addition，we should be an honest person at any time．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort他们真的喜欢因为他们想要不通过努力获得好成绩．
because引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study我们应该意识到考试作弊对学习不利．
realize后是that引导的宾语从句．

解答 Nowadays some students were criticized because of cheat．In the picture，we can see some students copying the answers from others while some are doing by themselves．（描述图片）They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort．【高分句型一】Meanwhile，some are under great pressure，so they are afraid of failing in the exam．（作弊的原因）We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study，【高分句型二】and the future is full of sharp competition and any success achieved by cheating won't last long．
In my opinion，we should study hard to get good grades．In addition，we should be an honest person at any time．（看法，提出建议）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．