题目内容

假设你是高山,你的外教Mr.Smith相组织几名学生去一个学校进行一次助学和联谊活动。请参看以下信息,以书信的形式向Mr.Smith提出申请,说明你打算如何开展这次活动并陈述理由。
能力
计划
善于交流
相处融洽
爱好,例如…
组织活动
英语口语好
帮助学习英语,如…
注意:
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点, 适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Mr.Smith
I’m so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in a school. I hope I __________________________________________________________
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I’ll be thankful if you give ne the chance!
Yours
Gao Shan   

Dear Mr.Smith
I’m so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in a school. I hope I can join in it. I think I have the abilities to help them. First I’ll get on well with the kids there.. I can do it because I always communicate well with others. And I have a few hobbies, such as playing basketball, ping-pong and singing songs. So I’m going to help organize after-class activities. Also, I speak good English. I can help the kids with their English. I’ll read English loud with them and teach them English songs. It’s really fun.
I’ll be thankful if you give ne the chance!
Yours
Gao Shan

试题分析:这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照题目要求并结合表格中的内容完成这篇申请报告,我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含你的能力和组织这次活动的计划等几个方面进行陈述,表达出个人的观点等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,人称主要是第一人称,注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了自己的申请目的和要求及自己具备的能力和组织活动的计划等,并包含了文中所要求的基本信息,并展开了合理的联想。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语,包含状语从句和宾语从句的准确使用为文章增色不少.如 I’m so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in a school.,I can do it because I always communicate well with others.,get on well with the kids,help the kids with their English学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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