Question

近年来广场舞越来越流行。在公园、小区甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人们。上周, Helping Hands Club进行了一项问卷调查。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，并谈一谈对此事的看法。

赞 成：● 是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能锻炼身体

● 可以结交有共同爱好的朋友

● 人人都有权利(right)在广场和空地等公共场所开展活动

反 对：● 音乐声音太大，影响附近居民的正常生活

● 媒体报道噪音扰民引起打架伤人

你的看法：● ……

要求：1. 所写内容必须包含以上信息，可适当发挥。

2. 自拟你对广场舞现象的看法，不少于两点。

3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

4. 语句通顺，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。

5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people’s study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.

In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据提纲内容正确地表述赞成反对的观点，并且要正确阐述自己对此事的看法。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，先表达赞成的观点，再表达反对的观点，最后表达自己的观点，结构清晰。同时文章衔接连贯，运用了what’s more, but, in my opinion等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:It’s a good way to do, between…and…, take actions等。文章还运用了定语从句。

考点：提纲作文。