Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分，中考时满分为25分）

假设你是刘莉，要去英国一所学校游学两个月，希望在当地找一个host family。请按要求写一封约100词的电子邮件给中介公司的经理Mr. Green。

内容包括：

1. 自己的个人情况，如年龄、性别、爱好；来自华东，希望改善英语口语（Spoken English);

2. 提出自己对该家庭的要求（如下表所示）

Family members	English speaker；no smoker; with a secondary student
Housing	Near the school, within a 20-minute walk; a bedroom with a bathroom
Others	Cooking by myself…

注意：邮件需涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥；开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

Dear Mr. Green,

My name is Liu Li,

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Liu Li

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m a sixteen-year-old boy from East-China/eastern China. I’m going to study in a secondary school in England for two months.

I like making friends. I’m weak in spoken English and I hope to improve it. That’s why I want to find a host family with a secondary student. In this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life. I hope it’s a family without smokers. Moreover, it’s better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom. As for the meals, I’d like to cook by myself because I’m fond of cooking.

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【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如’m weak in spoken English and I hope to improve it. That’s why I want to find a host family with a secondary student. In this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life. I hope it’s a family without smokers.等等。