Question

18．最近你和父母就你要参加校篮球队交换了意见，各自阐述了观点．现在请你参照表内所提的信息，谢一篇100词左右的短文．

Your parents'ideas	Your ideas
1．less time for study	1…
2．not strong enough	2…
3．get easily injured	3…

注意：（1）开头部分已写好，你只需接着写．
（2）所写内容必须包括表格中父母的 想法和 你的 想法（至少三条）．
（3）不得使用真实姓名和校名．
Recently I've had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should join the the school basketball team．They don't think I am strong enough to be a good basketball player．I might get hurt while playing．And they hope I will spend more time on my studies．They think the students who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy．
However，I don't agree with them．I know they care about me．But becoming a member of the school team is my dream，you know．I'll try my best to keep a balance between my study and sport．And I can be more careful when playing．The other members are friendly and helpful．I can make friends with them．Playing basketball can make me stronger and more energetic．It's more important for me to learn how to work with others in a team．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是你和父母就你要参加校篮球队交换了意见，各自阐述了观点，谈谈你父母的意见和自己的意见．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．父母的意见；更少的时间学习，不够强壮，容易受伤
2．我的意见；
常用到的重点短语：
be going to  打算…
and so on 等等
of course 当然
take photos照相
【高分句型】
1．They don't think①I am ②strong enough to be a good basketball player．
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②adj+enough+to do sth 足够…去做某事
2．They think①the students②who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy．
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②who作为关系词的定语从句，who作为从句的主语，修饰先行词students．
3．①It's more important for me to learn②how to work with others in a team．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②疑问词+to do sth 作为learn的宾语．

解答 Should I join the school basketball team？
Recently I've had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should join the school basketball team．
They don't think I am strong enough to be a good basketball player．【高分句型】I might get hurt while playing．And they hope I will spend more time on my studies．They think the students who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy．【高分句型】（父母的意见；更少的时间学习，不够强壮，容易受伤）However，I don't agree with them．I know they care about me．But becoming a member of the school team is my dream，you know．I'll try my best to keep a balance between my study and sport．And I can be more careful when playing．The other members are friendly and helpful．I can make friends with them．Playing basketball can make me stronger and more energetic．It's more important for me to learn how to work with others in a team．【高分句型】（我的意见）

点评 这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果