Question

20．学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力．请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的观点，以"How can we protect ourselves？"为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护．
注意：短文中，不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．

How can we protect ourselves？
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers．自我保护是青少年最重要的技能之一．句子中one of+the+形容词的最高级形式+名词复数形式表示最…的之一．
②In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger．总之，每个人都需要学习如何保护自己，远离危险．这里in short表示总之；need to do sth表示需要做某事．

解答 How Can We Protect Ourselves
   Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers（高分句型）．But how can we protect ourselves？Here are some of my suggestions．（引出话题）
   First，we should be careful when we make friends，especially on line．Second，if we are in danger，we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe．Also，we ought to eat healthily and safely．Besides，we shouldn't crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school．Last but not least，summer is coming，we must remember it's dangerous to swim alone．（自我保护的措施）
   In short，everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger（高分句型）．（总结）

点评 这是一篇图画作文，动笔前应认真看图，了解图画内容，展开合理想象．然后根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．