Question

12．写一篇介绍自己房间的作文，如房间里有电话、床、书桌、椅子、书柜和沙发．书和磁带在书柜里，电子游戏在沙发上，狗在椅子的下面…
可以发挥自己的想象，题目自拟，不少于50．
I have a small but tidy room．There is a bed，a chair，a desk，a bookshelf and one sofa in it．I often put my books and tapes in the bookshelf and my video games on the sofa．The lovely creature sitting under my chair is my dog．This is my room．I love my room．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I have a small but tidy room我有一个小但是整洁的房间．
but表示转折．
【高分句型二】
There is  a bed，a chair，a desk，a bookshelf and one sofa in it里面有一张床，一个书桌，一个书架和一个沙发．
there be句型，表示有．

解答 I have a small but tidy room．【高分句型一】（总述）There is  a bed，a chair，a desk，a bookshelf and one sofa in it．【高分句型二】I often put my books and tapes in the bookshelf and my video games on the sofa．The telephone is on the desk．The lovely creature sitting under my chair is my dog（房间布局）．This is my room．I love my room．

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