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根据下面3幅图的提示，写一篇70～80个单词的短文．要求能充分表达出图画所示的内容，意思连贯、完整、语法正确．

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学生：习作： 　　Yesterday morning Meimei got up at half past six at usually(X1). After breakfast, she went to school. On the way she found a wallet lain(X2) on the road. She picked up it(X3) and stood on the roadside. She waited for a while, but nobody came and looked for it. 　　“What shall I do?” she said to herself. “If I'll wait(X4) the owner, I'll be late for school.” 　　At last she decided to send it to the police. 　　She went to the police station and gave the wallet to the policeman. 　　“You're a good girl. Thank you.” a policeman said. 　　When he went(X5) to school. Meimei was just in time for class. 　　剖析：“as usual”是固定词组，意为“照常；像往常一样”．不可写作“as usually”． 　　2．“lain on the road”作found的复合宾语补足语是错误的．应该用带现在分词的复合宾语lying on the road．lying是lie(在……处[有])的现在分词，此处意为“她发现在路上有一只皮夹子．” 　　3．“picked up it”是错误的．须知，当代词(it，them等)作 pick up的宾语时，必须位于pick up之间，如：pick it up；如果是名词作宾语，用“pick up +n．”或“pick +n．+up”都可以． 　　4．“If I'll wait for…I'll be late…”句中的从句时态错误．须知，在带有条件(或时间)从句的复合句中，当主句中的谓语用将来时时，从句中的谓语用现在时表示“将来”．因此，须将该句改写为：“If I wait for…”． 　　5．此处，按情景，不是“went to school”(上学)，而是“到达学校”，故应将went改为got，即：“when she got to school”(get to到达)． 　　总评：这篇习作能抓住图画要点，语言上虽有几处失误，但叙事清楚，行文流畅，意思连贯，词语、结构运用得当，如：decided to send…to…；gave the wallet to…；in time for class；等等．尤其是文中对话，能贴近情景，颇有生动感．